雅思翻译 汉译英技巧之“八大戒”

掏出张生那封信，回头环视见梳妆台上的梳妆盒，眼睛一转，心里说有了，将信放了进去，合上盖时故意压了一角露在外面。

    Rose took out Zhang's letter, she thought, “It would be better to put it in her make-up case, and letter find it herself.” So she put the letter in the case, leaving a corner of it sticking out, so that it would be quickly noticed.

    不难看出，译文与原文相去甚远，互不吻合，成了“两张皮”。

    你已经死在过深的怨愤里了吗？

    死？不，不，我还活着——

    请给我以火，给我以火！

    Have you perished in this deep rancor and bitterness­

    Death­ No, no. I'm still alive.

    Please give me a light, give me a light!