1. "Chinese people us
2. "I think environmantal protection is essential but not so important." (典型的逻辑混乱......essential就等于very important，环保是至关重要但是不是那么重要的?......无语......)
3. "Without electricity, the world would become so dark that a person could not even see a hand in front of his face." (缺了至关重要的时间状语at night!这么说的话古代人都是一直生活在伸手不见五指的黑暗中的吗?)
4. "Watching TV is convenient and people can avoid traffic jam" (这又是什么逻辑?看电视和避免交通拥挤有什么关系?)
5. "I like writing because it is good for your health."
(Why?......)
6. "My grandmother is 98 years old so she is very pure." (为什么98岁就必然“纯洁”?)
7. "As we all know, every advantage has its disadvantage." (......好深奥......)
8. "The rate of net-cheating has boomed by 1.27% in the past 2 years." (说这句话的人一定是雅思图表作文没学好。Boom=Increase rapidly，增长1.27%算rapid吗?应该用climb或edge up。)
9. "Modern ways of life brings people some healthy diseases." (疾病还有“健康的疾病”?貌似说这句话的人想表达的是"健康方面的疾病吧"?那就直接用desease就可以了，因为所有的疾病都是“健康方面”的，要么还有哪方面的?)
10. "My father is a photograph......" (我爸爸是一张照片?这个强劲的......应该是photographer。)
11. "The data is very astonished!" (“数据非常吃惊”?典型的没有学好现在分词和过去分词的区别，应该用astonishing-“让人惊讶的”。)
12. "At that time, I was studied at university." (“我那时候在大学里被研究?”你是小白鼠吗?应该是I was studying at university。)
13. "Traveling can enlarge our eyesight." (旅行能够拓宽我们的视力?应该是broaden our horizon吧。)
14. "Today, more and more people are getting old." (不是more and more people在变老，是everybody!只要你是地球人都在getting old的......)
15. -"Are you a student or are you working now?"
-"Oh, in my opinion, I am a student." (为什么要加in my opinion?难道别人都不承认你是学生?)
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