下面是今天的Topic Tree 的Gary考官高分范文~
Gary 高分答案：Tree
My favorite plant is the rose because it’s quite pretty and gorgeous as well as having a variety of bright and illuminating colors. Additionally, I often buy vibrant roses for my mother on Mother’s Day and she loves to put them in water to keep them as long as she can. The rose stands for love and affection and it’s a wonderful way to display your feelings for another person. 点评： 1. 同义词的转换：gorgeous 代替beautiful 2. illuminating 为加分词汇
I remember planting a tree when I was in middle school during Earth Day on April 22. Every year, our school organized environmentally-friendly activities for the students. I remember digging holes in the soil, putting in seeds and then covering them up. It made me feel that I was contributing to society and making a difference for future generation 点评： environmentally-friendly activities 用词巧妙
I do not like the forest because I believe it is very dangerous since there are snakes and other wild animals. When I go to the forest, it is very difficult for me to enjoy my time because I will usually be scared of the animals and it’s easy to get lost. Furthermore, there are many mosquitoes in forests and they always bite me, making me feel very terrible when I go there. 点评： 1. Since 代替 because，避免重复使用。 2. mosquitoes 为加分词汇~一般人不会说
There are various benefits of trees and they improve our lives in a wide assortment of ways. Firstly, they add natural beauty to the landscape, especially in different seasons when their leaves are a variety of colours. Second, trees create oxygen for people to breathe, adding freshness to the air. Finally, they are not only homes for a vast amount of animals, but can also be used to make furniture that is used in our daily lives.
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