教育类话题是雅思写作中比较常考的一个话题,和社会类环境类是雅思大作文话题三剑客。所以,对于那些备考时间有限的同学,可以多多关注下这三个话题。 今天的这道题目又多次改头换面地出现在考场中,所以大家对于这种频繁光顾的话题一定要认真复习。没准你就可以通过通过再现练习或者课堂的方式在考场上斩获作文的高分。
好了,题目分析:
students in school or university learn more from classes of teachers than other resources(eg.internet or TV) do you agree or disagree?
这类题目又多次改头换面地出现在考场中,所以大家对于这种频繁光顾的话题一定要认真复习。没准你就可以通过通过再现练习或者课堂的方式在考场上斩获作文的高分。
文章结构第一段:开头段,引出自己的观点,即可以从老师身上学到更多的知识。
第二段:第一个分论点,认为学习不仅仅是学习知识的简单传递,而且还是师生间的互动。
第三段:第二个分论点,认为从老师身上不仅可以学到知识,而且老师可以为学生提供监管。第四段:驳论段,说明在学生也可以从其它方面资源地方学习。第五段: 自然结尾,重申主题。
范文The updated understanding of study and the cutting-edge technology(尖端科技) usher in an era when the students can have a variety of ways to acquire knowledge(学习知识). Although there are other forms to obtain knowledge and information, I am still the proponent(支持者) of the belief that students can learn more from their teachers than other resources.Study, to some degrees, is not a one-way input of knowledge, while it is the procedure of mutual interaction between teachers and students. In the conventional teaching and learning mode(传统的教学和学习模式), teachers and students co-exist in an environment where they can have timely interaction. This means teachers can have a more comprehensive and directly understanding of their students’ shortcomings and strong points, which guarantees that students can learn more from the courses that are tailored(量体裁衣的,有针对性的)to their needs.It is apparent that students can obtain more knowledge from their teachers because teachers do not only function as craftsmen(匠人,工匠) who only impart knowledge(传递知识) but also serve as a supervisor or a guardian. This is especially true in the case where students are less self-disciplined (自律的)and are inclined to go astray (误入歧途)without the supervision and guidance of teachers. By comparison, others resources of learning such as Internet and TV sometimes are likely to make the students distracted due to a host of irrelevant information,(不相关信息) which will undermine (一点点削弱)their learning efficiency and make students learn less.It is also true that students are likely to learn more from other resources. Internet and TV are two media where there are a wealth of (很多)knowledge and information ranging from science and humanity. They are also the easily accessible platforms for the students who are in the remote places(偏远地区)where the teaching resources are not so abundant (充足的)as that in more developed regions. However, other learning resources can hardly challenge the dominant role (主导地位)played by teachers.To sum up, teachers are still the primary resource from whom the student can gain knowledge, although the influence of other learning resources cannot be underestimated. (330 words)
老师说:好了,这是对这篇文章的简单分析,黄色高光的部分是一些可以学习记忆的词组,大家可以先熟读记忆,然后运用在自己的写作之中。这周的文章分析就到这里啦,下周我们接着唠嗑雅思写作的点点滴滴。
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