雅思布局详解原创范文:儿童教育

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开头段:

Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities

and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people’s

view towards some traditional practices.     When it comes to

 __________,  people from different backgrounds hold different

attitudes. And they rarely reach an absolute consensus on such

an issue.

第一个主体段落  一方面

Granted, there could be some positive effects __________may

bring about when people choose to _______.

One social factor that influences people’s decision is

that ____________. 拓展…

Another reason is concern over _____________.拓展…

In the third place,________.拓展…

第二个主体段落  另一方面

However, the opponents firmly believe that ____, and they

against it for a couple of sound reasons.

Firstly,  __________. At the same time, ________. In addition to

that, _______.

结尾段

All the above opinions make sense. Therefore it is really hard to

draw a definite conclusion.

However, on balance, I am convinced that __________________.

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Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people’s view towards some traditional practices. When it comes to home schooling,people from different backgrounds hold different attitudes.People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a issue.

Granted, there could be some positive effects home schooling may bring about. One social factor that influences parents decision is that they worry their children will suffer from bullying or will be forced into antisocial behavior by peer pressure. For instance, They believe that the good behavior they have taught the child will be lost in school. Another reason is concern over the quality of schooling available. Schools frequently have large classes. They are often under-funded, and staffed by teachers without sufficient knowledge of their subjects.In the third place, some parents may disagree with the aims of the school curriculum, preferring for academic, social or cultural reasons to keep their children separate.

However, there are many arguments in favor of sending children to conventional schools and receive education with other students. The first is that group education can increase children’s communication skill. In school, children will interact with each other and develop social skills eventually. At the same time, children will learn to function outside the family. They will not be dependent on their parents for their educational, emotional and social needs. In addition to that, children will find it easier to integrate when they finish school, as they will, when they start work or college.

All the above opinions make sense. Therefore it is really hard to draw a definite conclusion. However, on balance, I am convinced that while many parents work hard to teach their children at home, conventional schools are still the right choice for most children. Group education is not perfect, but it seems to be a proven way of preparing our children for the real world.

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