Version 95写作参考

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Version 95(2). People doing different kinds of work enjoy different amount
of holiday time. Should people have the same amount of leisure time?
Give your opinion using some of your own experience.
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During the last 30 decades, people OF DIFFERENT KINDS OF WORK all over the world
enjoyed different amountof holiday time  （who have chosen different kinds of work）.
This phenomenon occured because of social division of work.

It's true that this could encourage people （working）TO WORKING harder and give them
enough time to do things （as） they like. And supporters say that  the social
division of work is a sign of progress of the society and civilization. They argue
that without the holidays between hard works and easy works  many people
who are working laboriously will find themselves  being tired of the work and
willing not do it anymore.

However, the difference, I think, is not fair because a lot of workers who
areworking hard do not receive any long vocations. For example, one of my
friends have to do 10 hours of （works）WORK in a Sino-Japan co-operation company,
（no）WITHOUT Saturdays . But in some areas people who （have got）GET a high salary
need not TO work at  offices longtime.  Another factor I am against is the CLASS.In a
case,a boss （having）HAS  plenty of time （is freeing）TO FREE  himself in Hawaii or
Minorca while his Chinese clerks is working sweatily at a oil well in the desert of Middle
East.

At last but not least, the leasure time of some kinds of jobs is hard to
turn to real. My aunt ,（who is） a doctor in an emergency department,hardly
has （any） time to relax herself.But  TO  compare with her , her husband ,（who is） a
officer, （seemed）SEEMS  to have a large amount of time to do things he is willing TO 
do and is  paid double salary （to  her）CONTRAST WITH MY AUNT.

All in all,the difference is unfair .People should have the same amount of
leasure time.We should not focus eyes on the advantages of it  but why
people have not the same leasure time AND not fairly, and do our best to
smooth the （unjustness）INJUSTICE.

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