雅思大作文：男女有别

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下文18句，每句编号。提出ABC三个小小心得。

A。常用链接用语套话举例。

B。偶尔考虑人称使用【One】。

C. 【起承转合】的套话举例。

开头起

1. 【It is generally agreed that】 men and women are created equal but they have different missions in life due mainly to biological inclinations.

2. 【This leads one to believe that】 some specific jobs better fit either males or females only, with people of both sexes doing what they do best.

3. Although the gender issue in terms of work opportunities and income disparities still exists today, no one should ever imagine changing the charm that belongs to women and the strength to men.

接头承

4. 【To begin with】, women's charm often works wonders.

5. 【To illustrate this point】, one need only to see the way they use men to do what they want.

6. 【In general】, women are superior to men in caring and nurturing and other fields related to domesticity, therefore those women who seek to be equal to men in strength lack correct ambition.

7. 【It is interesting to point out that】, in the fields of administrative and secretarial workplace, females outnumber males about four to one while the number of female presidents and prime ministers, and of CEOs and managers, is also up and rising.

8. 【Furthermore】, nowadays it is scarcely possible to stop women from replacing men in whatever jobs in which talents and abilities are concerned and strength is not essential.

9. If at this time there are still more men in charge, it is because women have other jobs that are more rewarding and charming to do, like being mothers at home.

转头转

10. 【In comparison】, men have traditionally been viewed as the breadwinners or workers， owing to their strength.

11. The macho-image is active and aggressive.

12. 【Needless to say】, some particular jobs may exclusively go to them.

13. 【One should note here that】 women, naturally passive and charming, need not apply for such posts as miners, sailors, ironsmiths or butchers and the like.

14. 【In view of this】, the traditional stereotypes are as good today as they used to be.

15. What really matters then is that men and women are happy in their corresponding roles, even though there are obvious disparities between individuals as a result of gender.

回头合

16. 【As a conclusion】, one should not forget the paradox that just as women's strength is charm, men's charm is strength, other things being equal.

17. 【Besides】, one should also accept that the quality of employment depends as much on biological differences as on qualification similarities.

18. 【In real life】, neither gender is the weak sex.

A》Some useful words and phrases for writing:

写作实用的套话举例。好处是帮助思维连贯在心图上，又可以有意义的凑字数。雅思中国网，看似平凡如草根。其实雅思哥编的教材，日日更新，往下扎根而不是向上打高空。

1. It is generally agreed that...

4. To begin with,

5. To illustrate this point,

6. In general,

7. It is interesting to point out that...

8. Furthermore,

10. In comparison,

12. Needless to say,

13. One should note here that...

14. In view of this,

16. As a conclusion,

17. Besides,

18. In real life,

B》One 的运用：考虑用【We】，少用【I】。
写英文的风险之一是怎样处理论说文中的人称。一直“我我我”的，不算好技巧。偶尔为之，也要依照试题指示。用不用【One】不是问题，用了也没有问题，但是前后必须采用同一人称【One】。种种方式，仅凭尊便。反正写作不求人，勤自修，常上网，自己就是最好的教练。雅思大作文大多是议论文，很像古式八股文，格式花样少，内容戏法变化多端。有疑问，问雅思哥要模板。

2. This leads one to believe that...
3. No one should...
5...one need only
13. One should note that...
16...one should not

C》Structure: 结构有组织四段。每段的招牌句套话举例。

起1. It is generally agreed that...【开头】

承4. To begin with, 【接头】

转10. In comparison, 【转头】

合16. As a conclusion, 【回头】

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雅思写作套话炒冷饭：【男女有别】

雅思大作文：男女有别