网友用模板谈雅思真题:广告

网友用模板谈雅思真题:广告
来源:雅思中国网
作者:上海网友
编辑:www.ieltschn.com 
 
 
新手写作如果缺乏自信,难免心思模板造势。要怎样用模板才狠而能先确保雅思写作单项6.5继续上进?利用雅思中国网的半成品模板套话,或者参考其他人的模板,只不过求个方便,应付考试过关罢了。网友选择模板时要精选适合思维习惯,不必勉强自己听大牌培训班名师的保证。
 
雅思哥苦心提供的初步写作模板,时有网友评论。一位上海的雅思候选人,用一套雅思哥搞的模板:【说明一物的利弊】。网友写一篇关于【广告利弊】的问题作【主题】,以模板作基础【结构】,加上自行抄录本网站刊登的独创范文作【内容】的参考。网友的操作,本网站引用并讲评如下文。
 
》点评网友课业--【主题,结构,内容】
 
模板只是一个写作【结构】的架子,架子上你想要摆的,就是【内容】。成功的摆设肯定有重点,不能乱七八糟,所以重点就是【主题】。
 
内容的来源必须选择对路。你参考 www.ieltschn.com/study/writing/21570.html  雅思范文,更也应该补充其他有关的资料。如此你才有多种而切题的【理由,例子,细节】来支持【内容】,而却要针对【主题】的指示,放在模板骨架的【结构】上。

 
你参考的范文【IELTS Essay: Good Things and Bad Things about Advertising】是一枪散弹,影射好几个雅思真题,但是都与广告的话题有关。
 
》网友取【内容】素材:
 
广告=Advertising
IELTS 小笔记
 
Good things--
 
1. Advertising tells us about new products and services that can improve our lives.
2. Advertising gives us many choices of consumer goods.
3. Through the media outlets like television, advertising can promote sales.
4. More sales is good for economy because more jobs can be created.
5. When more people are employed, they will have more buying power.
 
Bad things--
 
1. Advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need.
2. We are surrounded by advertisements almost everywhere and anytime, and there is no escaping the influence of advertising.
3. The bad influence of advertisements may make people more selfish and greedy.
4. The false information can also make goods more expensive.
 
 
》网友活用雅思哥的模板作【结构】骨架:

 
 
Introduction
AAA has improved the quality of our lives____________________________________________________. The advantages that 
_________ brings to us seem to overcome its disadvantages.  However, we cannot ignore its negative effects.
 

Body A
On the positive side, ___________________________________________________________________ __.  _________________,
___________________________________________________________.  Besides, _____________________________________
__________________________________.  In addition to __________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________.  Furthermore, ____________________________________
________________________________.
 

Body B.
On the negative side, ____________________________________________________________.  For example, _______________
____________________________________________________________________________________________.  Besides, 
____________________________________________________________________.  Furthermore,________________________
________________________:
 

Conclusion.
All in all, it seems that we cannot live without_____________.  But we should be also aware of the bad effects of ________ creates 
for the modern life.
 

》网友组了一篇简易短文,【主题】是谈广告的利弊:
 
Introduction. 
Advertising (has improved the quality of our lives) by playing an important role in the market economy.  (The advantages that advertising brings to us seem to overcome its disadvantages).  (However, we cannot ignore its negative effects).
 
Body A. 
(On the positive side), advertisements tell us about new products and services that can improved our lives..  Without advertising, plenty of choices of consumer goods would be otherwise unknown to us. (Besides), the advertising industry can promote sales through the media outlets like television.  (In addition) to giving a chance to us as consumers, advertising is good for the economy because more sales can lead to more production and create more jobs.  (Furthermore), when more people are employed, the society will also see more buying power.
 
Body B. 
(On the negative side), often consumers are encouraged to buy things they do not really need.  (For example), we are surrounded by advertisements almost everyday and everywhere, and it is impossible to escape the influence of advertisements.  (Besides), advertisements make people become selfish and greedy for more and more goods.  (Furthermore), sometimes false information makes goods more expensive.
 
Conclusion. 
(All in all), (it seems that we cannot live without) advertising.  (But we should also be aware of the bad effects advertising creates for the modern life).


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