网友用模板谈雅思真题:广告
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新手写作如果缺乏自信,难免心思模板造势。
雅思哥苦心提供的初步写作模板,时有网友评论。
》点评网友课业--【主题,结构,内容】
模板只是一个写作【结构】的架子,架子上你想要摆的,就是【
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你参考的范文【IELTS Essay: Good Things and Bad Things about Advertising】是一枪散弹,影射好几个雅思真题, 但是都与广告的话题有关。
》网友取【内容】素材:
广告=Advertising
IELTS 小笔记
Good things--
1. Advertising tells us about new products and services that can improve our lives.
2. Advertising gives us many choices of consumer goods.
3. Through the media outlets like television, advertising can promote sales.
4. More sales is good for economy because more jobs can be created.
5. When more people are employed, they will have more buying power.
Bad things--
1. Advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need.
2. We are surrounded by advertisements almost everywhere and anytime, and there is no escaping the influence of advertising.
3. The bad influence of advertisements may make people more selfish and greedy.
4. The false information can also make goods more expensive.
IELTS 小笔记
Good things--
1. Advertising tells us about new products and services that can improve our lives.
2. Advertising gives us many choices of consumer goods.
3. Through the media outlets like television, advertising can promote sales.
4. More sales is good for economy because more jobs can be created.
5. When more people are employed, they will have more buying power.
Bad things--
1. Advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need.
2. We are surrounded by advertisements almost everywhere and anytime, and there is no escaping the influence of advertising.
3. The bad influence of advertisements may make people more selfish and greedy.
4. The false information can also make goods more expensive.
》网友活用雅思哥的模板作【结构】骨架:
Introduction
AAA has improved the quality of our lives_________________________ ___________________________. The advantages that
_________ brings to us seem to overcome its disadvantages. However, we cannot ignore its negative effects.
Body A
On the positive side, ______________________________ ______________________________ _______ __. _________________,
______________________________ _____________________________. Besides, ______________________________ _______
______________________________ ____. In addition to ______________________________ ____________________________
______________________________ ___________________________. Furthermore, ______________________________ ______
______________________________ __.
Body B.
On the negative side, ______________________________ ______________________________ . For example, _______________
______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ __. Besides,
______________________________ ______________________________ ________. Furthermore,__________________ ______
________________________:
Conclusion.
All in all, it seems that we cannot live without_____________. But we should be also aware of the bad effects of ________ creates
for the modern life.
Introduction
AAA has improved the quality of our lives_________________________
_________ brings to us seem to overcome its disadvantages. However, we cannot ignore its negative effects.
Body A
On the positive side, ______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
Body B.
On the negative side, ______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
________________________:
Conclusion.
All in all, it seems that we cannot live without_____________. But we should be also aware of the bad effects of ________ creates
for the modern life.
》网友组了一篇简易短文,【主题】是谈广告的利弊:
Introduction.
Advertising (has improved the quality of our lives) by playing an important role in the market economy. (The advantages that advertising brings to us seem to overcome its disadvantages). (However, we cannot ignore its negative effects).
Body A.
(On the positive side), advertisements tell us about new products and services that can improved our lives.. Without advertising, plenty of choices of consumer goods would be otherwise unknown to us. (Besides), the advertising industry can promote sales through the media outlets like television. (In addition) to giving a chance to us as consumers, advertising is good for the economy because more sales can lead to more production and create more jobs. (Furthermore), when more people are employed, the society will also see more buying power.
Body B.
(On the negative side), often consumers are encouraged to buy things they do not really need. (For example), we are surrounded by advertisements almost everyday and everywhere, and it is impossible to escape the influence of advertisements. (Besides), advertisements make people become selfish and greedy for more and more goods. (Furthermore), sometimes false information makes goods more expensive.
Conclusion.
(All in all), (it seems that we cannot live without) advertising. (But we should also be aware of the bad effects advertising creates for the modern life).
Advertising (has improved the quality of our lives) by playing an important role in the market economy. (The advantages that advertising brings to us seem to overcome its disadvantages). (However, we cannot ignore its negative effects).
Body A.
(On the positive side), advertisements tell us about new products and services that can improved our lives.. Without advertising, plenty of choices of consumer goods would be otherwise unknown to us. (Besides), the advertising industry can promote sales through the media outlets like television. (In addition) to giving a chance to us as consumers, advertising is good for the economy because more sales can lead to more production and create more jobs. (Furthermore), when more people are employed, the society will also see more buying power.
Body B.
(On the negative side), often consumers are encouraged to buy things they do not really need. (For example), we are surrounded by advertisements almost everyday and everywhere, and it is impossible to escape the influence of advertisements. (Besides), advertisements make people become selfish and greedy for more and more goods. (Furthermore), sometimes false information makes goods more expensive.
Conclusion.
(All in all), (it seems that we cannot live without) advertising. (But we should also be aware of the bad effects advertising creates for the modern life).
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