范文可以参见:Learning a Foreign Language范文
Some people think all students should learn a foreign language.
Others believe that students should not learn a foreign language if she or he does not have the talent for it.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
细读真题得知其工作是抽象的讨论【1】学生必须学习外语。【2】
菜鸟无需学习外语,既然缺乏天分,学也学不好。
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1.These days, public has been going on in my country over whether all students should learn a lingo.
开头第一句不清楚。第二句说本篇将讨论两方面的意见,
lingo】这个字太偏。【public opinions have been divided】。
2. This essay will discuss both sides in this debate.
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第二段讨论学习英语的重要,算是切题。
3. It is evidently reasonable for some to argue that all students should learn a foreign language.
It stands to reason that all students should learn a foreign language like English.
4. As far as I am concerned, this view may be based on the consideration that the communications of civilization and economy between different countries are still the cornerstones of society.
The reason is based on the fact that English is a universal language for international communication.
5. More precisely, cultural integration and synthesis as well as international commerce could boost social development.
More precisely, learning to use English is obtaining a tool to enhance global trade and understanding.
6. Obviously, enquiring same language would spur this process effectively.
As of now, no other language is as important as English in a world of globalization.
7. Moreover learning the foreign language is an irresistible trend of social development, even a lingo should successful men learn, quite apart from the students with no social experience?
English language proficiency is often considered as a necessary experience for a successful career.
8. Lastly, learning a foreign language can generate employment opportunities.
Being able to speak, listen, read and write in English can pave the way to better job opportunities.
9. For instance, it is particularly advantageous to get a job in joint ventures.
This is particularly true when applying for a position in a multi-national joint venture.
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第三段稍微跑题了。也许可以反驳另外一个意见:
10. By contrast, some others claim that students [a student] should not learn a foreign language if she or he does not have the genius for it.
11. To starts [start] with, students who [have], by nature, no natural [linguistic] [inclinations], would rather learn something they [are] interested [in] [rather] than learn a language they unlike [dislike].
12. Thus, learning a language, sometime, is [both time and labor lost].
13. Moreover, making students learn a language compulsively may [cause] students to find it is monotonous and [boring].
14. As a consequence, it will have a detrimental influence upon them both physically and mentally.
15. Even so, [in consideration of] the increasingly fierce social competition, learning a foreign language might be [to their best] interest in the long run.
16. [They] will need that skill throughout their studies and working lives.
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17. In summary, I would concede that sometimes learning a different language is a nightmare for students who are [not inclined to learn].
18. Despite that, I think learning a lingo is necessary.
19. All in all, I [am] convinced that schools should pay more attention [to] foreign language class and make [learning] more entertaining.
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