托福谢振礼范文：错中学习
2012年8月26日独立写作
TOEFL iBT Essay+有问必答
By Jeenn Lee Hsieh 谢振礼老师
批评指错
》iBT Writing Topic 相似真题:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Parents should allow children to make mistakes and let them learn from their mistakes." Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Children from time to time make different kinds of mistakes--initially many of which are natural but later other mistakes could turn out to be undesirable . For that matter, as parents you had better be somewhat paradoxical in your attitudes toward raising children from stage to stage. The paradox is like that, at an early stage, children are always expected to stand up and walk as well as to open the mouth and speak; while at an older age, children are often asked to simply sit down and shut up.
Normally, mistakes that toddlers make are infantile events given them to grow up. For instance, you would never tie a rope to a baby and teach it to climb stairs by hauling it up by the rope. Nor would you spank a baby for not leaning to speak quickly enough. It is because babies learn by their own errors. So, if there is no learning happening, mistakes would have no worth at all. As can be imagined, mistakes might cause pain or impatience, and yet they could provide opportunities for growth. In this respect, only very small children should be allowed to make mistakes 'unconditionally' because this process of 'trial and error´' makes walking possible and speech possible.
While making mistakes is a fact of life, it is your response to the child's error that counts. When children should come to the age to start learning to distinguish right from wrong, you ought to explain what sorts of mistakes should not happen, being conditioned under different circumstances. Even though mistakes show what they need to learn, actually they need not learn every lesson the hard way or the wrong way. In other words, not trying to avoid situations in which children might commit 'dangerous' or 'immoral' blunders could be the biggest mistake of all on the part of parents. Therefore, it is not the right thing to do to turn a blind eye and a deaf ear to some of children's serious mistakes because in any case it is important to put kids on the right track.
In a certain sense, for younger children there are no mistakes, save one--the failure to learn from a mistake. From stage to stage, children make mistakes of different sorts, to be sure; nevertheless, parents should learn an effective strategy to help their children move on, leaving mistakes far behind which might otherwise unfortunately become crimes in the future. Accordingly, the key to good parenting is not to see a child's 'negative' mistake every time as an end product, but rather as a 'positive' beginning for progress in life. (Essay created by Jeenn Lee Hsieh 谢振礼老师, essay3663@hotmail.com )
》托福写作 放马后炮 有问必答
网友问：这回托福大作文真题‘错中学习’是不是冷门题？好像不容易应付。
猫头鹰：是考古题，没有指明是几岁的孩子在犯错，所以不好答题。父母态度不同时不尽相同吧！
网友问：怎样处理托福议论文的主题，结构，内容？难不难？
猫头鹰：主题清楚有焦点+结构复古有组织+内容逻辑有支持。不难。难的是英文的修辞句法词汇。
网友问：应该请老师怎样批改托福作文才能使学员在短期内实质地进步？
猫头鹰：老师应该少批评多改写。不光改文法拼字，还要按学员的原意再重写句子，并补充论证。
网友问：考托福也可以模仿雅思范文吗？二者大作文话题接近吗？
猫头鹰：很好。雅思范文多于托福。托福雅思题目相似。仿造句+论证。不少雅思范文不足300字。
网友问：练听力有助于托福写作能力。有何免费门路？
猫头鹰：美国传播管道NPR 和 CNN 很受欢迎。每天选听30分钟以上，进补写作+听力。少看电影。
网友问：推荐复习教材--听说读写？
猫头鹰：常用的'Practice Test"--OG3 (TOEFL iBT), TPO, Longman, Kaplan, Barron, Delta, Northstar etc。
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