9月雅思写作预测之一范文:社区义工

  慎小嶷雅思猜题;猫头鹰答题

猜中菲律宾真题:社区义工
猫头鹰在线写作实验室谢振礼

慎小嶷老师发布了9月写作预测http://www.ieltschn.com/study/writing/22257.html

此文针对9月的写作预测,不断的发布相对应的写作范文

 
雅思中国网首先独家发布
 
猫头鹰前言:猜题是健康的游戏,结果或是猜中或是猜不中都无关紧要,更重要的意义是鼓励考前习作。
 
话说国内名师猜题方式各有一套,并非毫无根据。比方说,花时间作中国考区真题考古,领悟近年来雅思出题走势(向天观星象,向地看风向)。不仅如此,有影响力的猜题半仙也注意到海外雅思考题的风吹草动。所以名师凭多年的教学经验,加上运用或然率的常识,进一步缩小猜题的范围。
 
雅思写作真题风水轮流转。举一例:2012年8月澳洲考区的一道试题与中国考区的一道试题几乎雷同,时间前后距离不到15天。针对这一题(“博物馆收费的利弊”)请参考谢振礼范文:“访博物馆”。
 
慎老师一共猜测20题,其中第六题(“社区义工”)曾在菲律宾考区出现。猫头鹰有一篇相应的范文未曾发布过,今天特别转投雅思中国网。另外19题,猫头鹰可能来不及提出全部回应。
 
 
>两题比较:A. 国外菲律宾雅思真题 vs. B. 名师慎小嶷雅思2012年9月猜题(8月29日发布)
 
 
题外指示--You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.  Write at least 250 words.
 
菲律宾 A)Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time.  This can benefit the teenagers and the community as well.  Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your opinion and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
 
慎小嶷 B)  It is suggested that all secondary-school students should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community.  To what extent do you agree or disagree?  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
 
 
>实验范文:雅思中国首先发布
Jeenn Lee Hsieh 谢振礼老师原创
 
Although teenagers of all secondary schools (and of colleges) are under no obligation to do community service,  an amount of volunteering on their part are beneficial to themselves and to the community at the same time.  If nothing else, by participating in such extracurricular activities as helping the poor and the sick in their free time, they can gain important knowledge that cannot be learned in the classroom. Generally speaking, community service is an educational experience, a social experience, and perhaps a lot of fun, too.

It makes educational sense for students to understand that part of being a useful person is about helping others who are struggling.  Without a sense of caring, there can be no sense of community.  In fact, for a community to be whole and healthy, it must be based on compassion and concern for each other.  Unpaid community service is significant because the strong have a responsibility to provide support for the weak.  This is crucial to high school or college experience as it is that kind of knowledge which cannot be learned from a book. Therefore, it may be expected that every community service moment is memorable. 
 
In the social context, young people with experiences in community work are given the opportunities to have an understanding of human relationships and social vulnerabilities.  Through service work, they are meeting the community's urgent problems face-to-face. Community work is a moral cause because it is not only an act of generosity but also an act of love for their neighbors.  Further being unpaid work, it becomes a noble cause since this kind of community service is not compulsory and asks for nothing in return.  In their free time, teenagers can benefit from finding themselves stronger than ever, being capable of doing worthy tasks.   The community, of course, can as well benefit from this positive , voluntary power.

For the young people, the fun of feeling at heart that they are stronger than they could ever imagine is underlined by their experiences which are rewarding, both educationally and socially.  Indeed, in every community there is work to be done; and in every heart there is the power to do it.  When a sense of community is being felt as an act of responsibility rather than an act of generosity, blessed are the giving and the receiving.  (Essay created by Jeenn Lee Hsieh)
 

 


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