雅思写作Task1小作文饼状图范文--美国消费模式的变化

摘要:雅思中国网雅思频道这里和大家分享小作文饼状图的9分范文,题目是:Information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.(美国消费模式的变化)

Task:The pie charts show changes in U.S. spending patterns between 1966 and 1996.

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思路解析:

1. 主要采用折线模式,重点描述数据的改变和趋势

2. 留意极值(MAX, MIN)的描述

3. 分段的原则可为:上升的一段,下降的一段,保持不变的一段。

参考范文:

The two pie charts above give information about the change of the spending on 6 fundamental aspects of life in U.S from 1966 to 1996.

It is noticeable that the proportion of 3 parts, namely Cars, Restaurants and Computers, increased during the period. Specifically, the expenditure on Cars rose sharply from 23% to 45%, becoming the largest in 1996. Similarly, the percentage of Restaurants also doubled. In addition, Computers, which took up the smallest proportion only at 1% in American budget of 1966, soared up by 10 times to 10% by 1996.

For the rest 3 areas, however, the 3-decade period saw an opposite downward-trend. For example, in terms of Food which played a dominant role in consumption in 1966, there was a slump from 44% to only 14%. This was followed by Patrol and Furniture, in both of which a slight drop was found. In comparison, Books cost least money in 1996, which amounted to merely 1% in total, only one-sixth of relevant spending in 1966.

In conclusion, increased amounts spent on cars, computers, and eating out were made up for by drops in expenditure on food and books.

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