雅思小作文 | 柱图该咋写?以6月13日小作文真题为例!

      今天的主题是“柱图”。以2019年6月13日的真题为例

        2019年6月13日真题 国内A类：柱图　　

　　The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person by 5 countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected number for 2020.

　　千万不可以当成线图来写，因为时间不连续

　　高分范文及解析1

　　In the chart, two historical years and a foreseeable year are investigated in terms of the magazine sales per individual in 5 countries – A, B, C, D, and E.

　　永远不要忘记分组：

　　Countries A, B and C一组：下降

　　亘古不变的写作法：总——分原则

　　In A, B and C, the year of 2010 saw a slight fall, as it is compared with the year of 2000「用来表述比较关系的状语要写清楚」, and it is forecast that a drop will occur, on the 2010’s level, 「用来表述比较关系的定语要写清楚」in the year of 2020. ← 总，分 → The sales were highest in A and in 2000, and lowest sales is likely to be in C by the time of 2020; however, the sales will stay above an annual number of 30.

　　分组：Countries D and E一组

　　By stark 「表示程度的形容词是小作文的词汇关键」 contrast, the popularity of magazines increased in D and E in 2010, as the sales grew by 5. The anticipation for 2020「于是后面可以用will」suggests that D’s number will be greater than in 2010, and E will witness a decrease on the 2010’s level 「用来表述比较关系的定语要写清楚」. In addition, it is notable that these two countries had significantly lower sales (approx. 20 and 10 respectively) than A, B or C.

　　总结的内容写笼统

　　Overall, A, B and C were vastly different from D and E as we look at the sales and the pattern of change, and the difference is likely to remain.

　　200 words，本文的信息组织方式是本文偏长的原因

　　高分范文及解析2

　　☟☟☟

　　This bar chart shows how many magazines were sold in 2000 and 2010 per person in five countries – A, B, C, D, and E – with the estimates for 2020.

　　“历史和将来”写法：先写历史情况，再写将来预测

　　“历史”段落

　　A had the highest sales of magazines in the two historical years, followed by B and C. 「排序(描述数据之间的关系)写法：适合于数值靠近的项目之间」In A, the respective sales were 48 and 45, and in B and C, the numbers ranged between 35 and 40. D and E witnessed significantly lower sales, as their sales of magazines were around 20 and 10 in the two years. 「用状语从句也可以用来描述数据情况，不要依赖定语从句，并且，用状语从句描述时，有“事件感”」

　　不要机械罗列数据，而是总结性的描述pattern

　　通常只描述max.和min.

　　“将来”段落

　　According to the anticipation, the sales of magazines will, in four of the five countries, decrease compared with those in 2010. In the four countries, the estimated sales figures for 2020 are only slightly smaller. The situation in D will be different. 「用句子描述信息之间的逻辑关系，而不拘泥于短语形式的逻辑连接」The year of 2020 will see increased sales compared with those of 2010.

　　句子主语要多样 不要机械罗列数据

　　总结的时候，笼统写为宜

　　Overall, each of the countries had stable sales of magazines, despite the changes, and in the future year, the number will not be markedly different.

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