雅思大作文范文解析：为什么要上大学

题目

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university?

题型：综合提问

翻译：人们上大学的原因有多种（例如：新经历、职业准备、增长知识）。你认为人们为什么要上大学？

写作结构

开头段：背景介绍 个人观点

主体段 1：上大学的原因 1

主体段 2：上大学的原因 2

主体段 3：上大学的原因 3

结尾段：总结观点 重申理由

范文解析

开头段

人们上大学有多种原因，职业准备、新经历、增长知识是最普遍的三个原因。

背景句：People attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons.

论证：I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.

主体段 1

对于年轻人来说，为未来的职业生涯做准备越来越重要，这是上大学的一个基本原因。

主题句：Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college.

论证： They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.

主体段 2

上大学可以有不同的经历，遇到来自各地的人，也是第一次离开家，自己独立地做决定。

主题句：Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences.

论证：This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For most students, going to college is the first time they’ve been away from home by themselves. In additions, this is the first time they’ve had to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.

主体段 3

上大学也可以学到自己感兴趣的学科知识，也是最后一次机会去学习和自己未来职业不相关的知识。

主题句：Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in subjects they find interesting.

论证：For many, this will be their last chance for a long time to learn about something that doesn’t relate to their career.

结尾段

总结观点 重申理由：不应该只关注职业发展，应该上大学经历一些新事物，更多地了解世界。

I would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. They should go to college to have new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they live in.

重点表达

make a decision/decisions on one's own 某人自己做决定

relate to 有关

prepare for 为......做准备