2019年8月10雅思写作点评!

　　2019年8月10雅思写作点评!大家在考完雅思考试时，比较关注的就是考试题目的分析，可以从题目分析中看出我们考试时哪些题目有错误，今天小编整理了2019年8月10雅思写作点评，快来看看吧!

　　A类小作文

　　【作文类型】线图(动态)

　　【作文题目】:The graph below shows the change in the production (million tonnes) of three products in the forest industry in a European country from 1980 to 2000.

　　Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

　　注意筛选保持最高,最低, 描写趋势的程度差异, 并总结主要特征, 必要时可以选择合并的方式处理无明显主要特征的数字.

　　A类大作文

　　【作文题目】Some people say that drug companies have the responsibility to spend money researching medicine to help the poorer countries，others think the main responsibility of drug companies is making money. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

　　【题目分析】注意双边讨论的文章结构.

　　类似旧题: As well as making money, businesses also have the social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

　　【题材类别】社会类

　　【参考范文】Opinions are divided on what the responsibility of drug companies is. Some believe that pharmaceutical corporates should bear social responsibility and explore medicine to help less developed nations, while according to others, profitability should be the priority of drug companies. From my perspective, I agree with the former group.

　　The same as all the industries, making profits is the main task, and the drug companies is no exception. Only when the company is profitable can it survive in a fierce market competition and then develop prosperously. This theory also applies to the case of a drug company. Developing and inventing new medicine requires considerable investment in a series of things, ranging from sophisticated equipment and rare raw materials to high-level personnel and drug tests. Without sufficient financial support which for a company often means profits, it is out of the question to research new medicines to benefit the public.

　　Opponents, on the other hand, argue that drug companies ought to play a role in helping poorer countries, because this act can set up a good image of the company and bring greater profits in the long run. By selling medicines to patients throughout the world, these pharmaceutical companies save millions of lives and also gain huge profits, because when facing diseases, people have to buy these medicines, no matter how expensive they may be, otherwise their life would end. In such a situation, as a life-saving industry, large drug companies are financially capable to help people in poorer countries whose life are in danger. Although company’s income may be lowered in a short period, a larger section of the world would appreciate this behaviour and regard the company as a socially responsible one.

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