雅思写作的技巧总结

写作要拿到高分,我觉得一定要做到下面两点:

   1、有足够的练习。这个练习指的是完整地写够量的作文,不管是大作文还是小作文。雅思的作文题目(TASK 1和TASK 2)可以总结成很多种类,在培训班上老师都会为我们总结出来,因为不知道会考哪一类题目,所以每一类热门题都要做足够练习。
 

   2、要找老师改。我虽然也有在备考期间进行写作练习,但一来数量太少(大小作文各自不到10篇),二来我并没有找写作老师指导修改我的练习文章,连放到网上的论坛进行烤鸭互改都没有。自己单独练习的最大弊病就是,常犯的错误自己不管怎么改,一定是找不全的,因为已经形成习惯了。而别人就能够看得出来你下意识犯下的错误,即使对方只是一个能力跟你在一个水平的同学,找他们修改对提高作文成绩都是有好处的。
 

 建议一: 避免重复

 

1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子:
 

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
 

large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改为:

 

The farm my gradfather grew up on was large.
 

更简洁的表达方式为:
 

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
 

2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换,例如:
 

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.

这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly,显得更为简洁:

 

My grandfather has sad repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

 

建议二: 避免空洞的单词和词组

 

1. 一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子:
 

When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.
 

这句话当中的“when all ting ar considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:

 

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
 

2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如:
 

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
 

“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:
 

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

总结:雅思写作并不是越长越好,上面那些为了长度而增加的内容并不是必需的,化繁为简则可以起得意想不到的效果。推荐大家多去雅思相关网站上看看别人的写作,吸取别人的经验,在淘宝上的“阿拉丁英语”店铺就有很多关于雅思的写作服务,如果对雅思写作有疑问或是作文需要专人修改,那里都能找的到。


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