颜炜:雅思写作之传统建筑保护

Thegovernment is responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity. Thus, some people believe new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days,different ways are being taken to protect cultural identity.Obviously, not onlyis much contribution made to maintain old housesbut alsorules of laws associated with cultural protection turn out to be better. Some people even say that new houses are right to be set up same as traditional ones.I seem to be one of opponentswho believe thatthe action can be unsuitable in our world.

One of the main reasons is thatmost of traditional buildings, in my nation, that are capable of fewer people is hard to meet the demands for housingasincreasing numbers of people pour into the city.Compared tolast decade, today’s population has doubled and even trebled, which puts serious pressure on housing supply.As a result, old houses must be substituted for new ones that have more efficient utility,let alonevery traditional ones.

No doubts thatbuilding or maintaining traditional buildings are very essential to raise art sense and increase choices of people’s housing.Plus, these old housesare believed asvery important resources to attract international visitors.However, the proportion of traditional houses has to be under control,and otherwisethe housing of citizens is badly affected.

Overall, my view is thatcultural identity is so precious that more efforts and measures should be taken but carefully. The excellent tradition helps with deep understanding of history, and educates youths.Neverthelessa simple and reckless behavior. that new houses are built in a typical waydoes more harm than goodin the improvement of people’s being.

Organization + Contents

 

1st

提出社会问题+证明问题的存在+为了改善问题出主意+好主意还是坏主意,考虑何处

2nd

自圆无罪其说有理+在解释为什么的时候,谈到具体的社会现状

3rd

猜测这个观点的初衷12+局限性是重要的(限制条件+危害)

4th

表明对社会问题的态度+原因+谈谈观点的优势或危害

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