雅思写作“见官死”开头完全曝光(下)

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      “见官死”开头之六：过分简单 没有重点 ( 喷血指数：☆☆ )
      典型失败案例：
      Topic－The importance of environmental protection
      This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

      “见官死”开头之七：用词不当 表达不准 ( 喷血指数：☆☆ )
      典型失败案例：
      Topic－Should college students be allowed to get married?
      I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

      “见官死”开头之八：意思重复 原地踏步 ( 喷血指数：☆☆☆ )
      典型失败案例：
      Topic－Your opinion on DINK families
      My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

      “见官死”开头之九：中国俗语 胡乱翻译 ( 喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆ )
      典型失败案例：
      Topic 1－Is it good to have a large family?
      I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
      正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children
      Topic 2 －Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?
  We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……
      Topic 3－ Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?
      Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……
      Topic 4－ The advantage of being a nice person
     I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

      “见官死”开头之十：观点武断 态度强硬 ( 喷血指数：☆☆☆ )
      典型失败案例：
      Topic1－The importance of confidence
      In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
      Topic 2 － The solution to the traffic problem
      I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

（乐宁雅思名师俞伟国）