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各位兄弟姐妹。兔子0108考试的作文是7分,现在兔子把那天的作文贴上来与大家分享,希望各位烤鸭多提宝贵意见。坦白说,兔子的作文一向不大灵光,这次居然考了7分真是惊喜,兔子把那天的作文回忆了一下,觉得自己其实写得很菜,估计是gz看到兔子有用套句,组织也不算太乱,就手下留情了~~~
兔子很是感谢吴老师的套句和指导~~呵呵!!
兔子已经是尽量回忆作文的所有细节,坦白说,每段一开始都是套句——兔子可以清晰回忆,至于兔子“即庆写作”那部分——尤其是二、三段的中间,兔子不大记得了。感觉考试时比这个写得还多,还乱~~~(呜呜,吴老师别骂兔子)
大家姑且看看吧~~兔子脸红了~~
05年1月8日考题
【Topic】We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we can't trust the journalist, What do u think? And what do you think is the important qualities that a journalist should have?
Prompted by the fast development of the media, people can get lost of knowledge and information from news, but whether we can fully trust the journalist has become a thorny issue. People have been attaching greater weight to this problem. In this essay, I will try to explore this controversial issue and seek out some effective factors.
When it comes to news of today’s newspaper, different people have different attitudes. Personally, I think some news in some newspaper are misleading and cheating, especially the news about entertainment。Some journalists even produce or imagine a story and write it as a piece of news. The only task for they do so is just to achieve the major’s attentions. However some news from some famous media, for instance, BBC and Guangzhou Morning Post are true and responsible. This kind of news are always accompanied by data and evidences which are much more believable. They just tell the truth and what happened exactly.
Why some news is unbelievable while some are responsible and true? I believe that the qualities of a journalist contribute to this complicated phenomenon. Firstly, as a journalist, he or she should have a strong sense of responsibility. The journalist needs to tell the truth and the fact, be responsible of what he writes and talks. Furthermore, he must have skills of expressing himself by writing. He just needs to use exact words and suitable phrases to tell the public the fact, with out any imaginations. The last but not the least, he should be objective. What he needs to do just to tell what the fact is, it doesn’t need any personal ideas or emotion.
It is a brazen violation of the people’s basic right to know the truth of the world that journalists are cheating in the newspaper. As we should read a novel when we want to read a story, we should read a Newspaper when we want to now the truth. It is high time that both the government and the whole media make concerted efforts to let all the news are believable. I strongly hope that we can know what we want to know and what we should know from our media.(作者:启德雅思学员 曾捷)
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