写作范文:政府是否应该控制传媒中的暴力

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?

All too often people complain about the “evils” of much material available in our mass media. Some other frequently criticisms come from our disquieting society with the ever-increasing cases of violent crimes. Thus, it can make great sense for our government to put a curb on the amount of violence in public communications. (53 words)

It goes without saying that we are risking our safety and society’s values by allowing this type of material to be openly exposed to the public. That is to say, without control of what material is delivered to the masses, we can not expect people to have a proper sense of right and wrong as they will constantly see the horrific things that happen in the false reality of the media and become immune to feelings of disgust toward such atrocious deeds in real life. Controlling what is viewed on films and television is the responsibility of our government in order to decrease violence in the real world. (108 words)

Considering this problem faced by young people, who are among the most vulnerable in our society, we can never deny the government’s access. Indeed, exposing our young children to extreme violence on television or films would be detrimental to their development thus to the future of our society. (48 words)

When these points are all taken into account, we can see the straightforward necessity lies with our government’s participation, which will allow our children a better chance to develop in a healthy way and will provide a precious sense of security for the citizens. (44 words)

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