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这是我的学生孙琳的一篇优秀作文，略加修改，希望对烤鸭们有所帮助。
some people think that teaching children of different abilities together benefits everyone. others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment.
discuss both sides of view and give you own opinion
education is playing an important role in our world and becoming a vital task for 21 century. undoubtedly, parents are paying moire and more attention to it so that they come up with a variety of methods. some people hold that children with different abilities and gifts should be educated together, while others think that it is better to separate intelligent children from the average, provided with special treatment.
as first option is concerned, that teaching children together is the most common used way in schools. children have the equal right to be inculcated in school, regardless of age and sex. they should be ingesting knowledge from teachers with same status and sharing the facilities equipped by schools. moreover, different children own distinct gifts and abilities, which makes them distinguished from each other. by communicating with classmates and friends around these children, they are more likely to complement each other. in other words, they could learn from or be influenced by other children. just because of the diversity, the children have much more knowledge and novel thoughts to absorb from their peers. definitely, teaching children of different abilities together benefits everyone.
by contrast, how about these intelligent children separated from others? they could not get more opportunities to make new friends and be confined in such a narrow scope, either mentally or physically. in china, there are several special schools or classes sponsored by famous universities, called: juvenile class, which means they just enrol intelligent children with very high iq. most of these children are very young but accepting overwhelming study burden. they do not study with the same age children, yet separately. they are in spotlight, and become the focus of society with high expectation. however, not all of them could be successful in the future, even some children get serious psychological problems under such pressure. they lose the rights of sharing happiness they should have.
then, to be a successful person, s/he should be an ordinary person first. if the children are deprived of spending time with their friends and classmates, they will lose happiness. then, they could not grow up normally and healthily. in my opinion, children should not be separated but study together.
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