网上范文总结--献给8.9的考生(四)

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v115
范文：
Nowhere in the world has the issue of animals been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays more and more meat was provided for people, therefore many people think that animals are being killed just for food, and this kind of action is cruel for animals. The above point is absolutely true; this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that people should not master existent right of animals. Not only people but also animals have the right to live. More and more wild animals are rapidly disappearing from this globe, it couldn’t be divided with that animals were hunted and killed cruelly. It is unfair to animals whose existent right was only exchanged with people’s food.

Another reason is that if people do not eat meat, their health will not be affected. The tenet of Chinese Buddhism forbids monks to kill any animals and eat them. Moreover the Chinese Kongfu comes from the Chinese temple that is famous in the world. The Chinese monks’ healthy physique proves that cookbooks do not need have meat.

Last but not the least reason is that people have already made all kinds of man-made meat, so they do not have to eat animal meat. Man-made meat contains enough nutrition for healthy people, but it taste isn’t better than animal’s meat. At least, we do not have to kill animals in order to satisfy our appetite.

In conclusion, the important thing is to stop killing animals before it’s too late. Otherwise we will lose them.
写作范文：动物保护v104,v115

v116
task2 谈论一下媒体中 对青少年有不良影响的内容 你认为政府应该采取什么样的政策

 
v117
idea:
children要会competite:
1.现在是竞争社会.....2.竞争是生存的方法....3.塑造顽强性格,可以直面困难和人生
co-operate:
1.社会是个大家庭.....2.举例比赛需要协作精神....3.互补
最后show你的观点倾向

范文：
Nowhere in the world has the issue of competition and cooperation been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, the competition is more and more furious between different groups, but many people think that parents teach competition to children that it will be bad for their growth, let them learn how to cooperate that is the most important. Above point is certainly true; this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that children’ intellect is not enough capable to analyze right and wrong competition. If children do not have correct teaching, the competition easily leads children to a wrong way. For instance, children usually pay attention to match their clothing and toys; in fact, it is really worth competing thing that their study is being ignored.

Another reason is that if children work together, they could easily find out and supply their gaps. Because of limit of age, in order to children’s knowledge is limited so that they have the different strongpoint. When they work together, they can learn the merit from others, and quickly correct their mistakes.

Last but not the least reason is the cooperation means common progress. A people’s ability is limited, but group’s power is unlimited. Lots of things are really difficult to complete by personal power. Nevertheless, people work together to solve problems that will become really easy and simple. Thus, it is important to let children get to know signification of cooperation.

In conclusion, children ought to learn signification of cooperation and how to work together, in order to their better future.

v118
范文：
Nowadays, dozens of money was devoted to build all kinds of places of entertainment by our government, such as cinema and stadium. However plenty of people considered that lots of money should be devoted to more significant places, such as iatric ensure and education. The above point is certainly true, this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that people’s concept of entertainment have already changed hugely, traditional concourse of entertainment couldn’t be adapted people’s new require of entertainment. In this paying attention to times of personality, more and more items of entertainment could be selected, such as disco and amusement park. If government also spend plenty of money on building theater and stadium that they will be insignificant definitely.

Another reason is that lots of money should be spent on iatrical ensure and iatrical research by government. In this society, lots of handicapped and patients were suffering from ill; they need our kind help and care. Government should spend more money on this weak group to save their life. As well as they also have the right to enjoy a good health.

Last but not the least reason is that government should devote plenty of money to education. Lots of children lost chance of study at school, because of familial poor. The Asia had the largest number (37,000,000) of the students who unable to go to school. The children mean the future of the world, therefore children's education problems should be widely paid attention to by government.

In conclusion, government should spend more money on iatrical ensure and education, in order to the weak groups, such as handicapped and students who unable to go to school.