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Traditional arts civilized a nation. Do you think government should subsidize
musicians, artists, actors or drama companies? What should a government do?
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During the past 10 decades,people of different kinds of countries all over the world
enjoyed different cultural arts which were valuable to their nation.However this
case would not last for a long time because of the development of modern society.
So if our government tend to make us more like traditional Chinese, it should
subsidize the traditional arts.

Frankly,the amalgamation of different traditions is always good to a society,though
there were some offensively things such as wars,the Inquisition and so on. However,
some  meaningful  traditions  of  civilization  disappeared  during  this  kind  of
amalgamation . The traditional arts,the most beautiful diamond of tradition treasury,
were worth coming down and being carried forward.

Fortunately,the government has come to know that without the traditional arts such
as musicians,artists,actors or drama companies our society will be sapless. They did
subsidize some of these traditional arts but the fund was, as we can see,far below our
needs.

Another key to protect the traditional arts is enacting a law. For example it can be
written to the decree that the operator of traditional arts will pay a lower income tax
than of any other trades. And The government can also do something to organize the
traditinal arts union,broaden its incomes and prevent operators from giving up their
jobs.

All in all,the government should do something to support our tradition areas. And the
unions of other areas may,if possible, give useful helps to it too.

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参考范文：
Traditional arts, as valuable cultural relics of a nation, are disappearing far away
from the modern society. China, as one of the highly-civilized countries in the
world, abound in various forms of traditional arts, such as painting, calligraphy,
music, architecture and dramas, which are not only our national cultural treasures,
but also a rich fortune of the world. (58 words)

As essence of a local culture, traditional arts reflect a nation’s artistic talents and
traditions. For example, water-color painting depicts a harmony between people
and nature. Architecture illustrates a nation’s aesthetic value and religious belief.
Cathedrals, highlighted by Baroque style in the 17th century, represent Christianity.
Pagodas, totally different from cathedrals stylistically, are a symbol of Buddhism.
Peking Opera describes the history of our country. (65 words)

However, traditional arts are leaving contemporary people further and further
away, one of the main reasons for which is that the authorities concerned and
some institutes lack funds and professionals, which are quite essential to the
research and promotion of traditional culture. Another radical reason should be
attributed to the impact of western cultures on traditions. Young people, especially
youngsters, are addicted to western music like rock and roll, without any knowledge
about traditional musical instruments. With the economic globalization, traditional
culture and arts will be in the danger of assimilation. How to maintain and develop
traditional arts becomes the biggest concern of a government. (105 words)

Firstly, the government should lay a fund for the research and promotion of
traditional arts. Secondly, the research institutes and universities should work out
a long-term developing scheme, organizing systematic research on traditional
arts. Arts belong to a nation and the whole world as well. The prosperity of
traditional arts will diversify the culture of the world. (57 words)

1 题目问的是:政府是否应该资助和应该做什么.可这篇范文用了200多字说明^^的重要性和^^
衰退的原因.只用了50多字表述解决办法,是否要点儿跑题了??   这是雅思的写作思路吗??
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