雅思写作6.5 回忆

TASK ONE

  (Million)TOURISTS OF FIVE AREAS (90—05)                

 

 

 

 

1990

 

1995

 

2000

 

2005

 

TOTAL

 

402

 

519

 

605

 

702

 

Africa

 

12

 

17

 

22

 

27

 

America

 

102

 

116

 

124

 

114

 

 Europe

 

224

 

269

 

324

 

399

 

Asia and the Pacific

 

92

 

102

 

118

 

129

Middle East

 

9

 

15

 

17

 

24

(纯粹回忆,原图有小数点)

this is a table which illustrates the data about the tourists in different places worldwide between 1990 and 2005. 

overall,during these fifteen years,the volomn of tourists increase steadily from 420million to 702million.to be more exact, Europe was the most popular tourist spot over this period ,from 224millon,through 320million in 1995 and 380million,amounted to 399million in 2005 

according to the table ,we can also see that America,which owned the second largest travellers in 1990,declined to 114million after the peak at 124million in 2000.however,Asia and the Pacific experienced the dramatic growth during these 15 years, from 92million to 129million. 

Middle East and Africa were the least popular places while both of them also rose gradually those years.specifically, the number of tourists in Middle East jumped from 9 million to 24 million while Africa grew from 12miilion to 27 million in 2005

 

TASK TWO

using modern technology to work at home benefits workers only, but not employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In presen-day society,working is not restricted to office ,home also become workplace due to the staggering advancement of technology.However,some employers claim that this way cannot bring much benefits to them .Personnally,i am not favor with this opinion .in the following ,i will try to analyze how both employees and employers can profit from working at home. 

 

Without a doubt,some advantages can be brought from working at household to employees.Flexibility,obviously,is the first crucial element which attracts the emloyees to work at home.people can choose the suitable time to work in a day .without the time limitation ,employees would tend to finish the job more carefully and effectively.Hence,the second benefit should be mentioned is the efficiency.working at home ,which is more comfortable than office,workers absolutely would work more hard so as to show their thanks and appreciation to boss.therefore,employees can achieve more than who work in office. 

 

Certainly, employers can also gain benefits from this creative working pattern. firstly,as i mentioned above,higher efficiency of employees can finally promote the sales and development of the company.performance of workers  is what a boss value the most.hence,if working at home can contribute to the  sales, company should satisfy the need of employees. what's more, working at home can also save a large sum of capital of company. The rent and the relevant expense ,such as electricity and water,can be saved totally.Hence ,more investment can be utilised on other aspects,contribuing to the competitive power of enterprise. 

Therefore, as what i has been mentioned,i may draw a conclution that employees as well as employers can profit from working at home owing to its obvious merits.


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