IELTS Essay: Fast Food 写开头与结尾

 IELTS Essay: Fast Food
Introduction and Conclusion
 
A contribution from overseas
By Jeenn Lee Hsieh
For www.ieltschn.com
 
雅思中国网的雅思哥与网友在线互动,回答网友一个关于大作文写作的问题。北京网友提出真题【FastFood】,并要求本站讨论怎样写开头与结尾。简答如下:【没有标准答案,只有答案标准】。举一例,当然不是标准答案。请雅思新手注意【主题结构内容】三位一体的布局。
 
起段--常吃【速食】会导致=【A。发胖】+【B。变懒】
 
承段--证明会【发胖】
 
转段--证明会【变懒】
 
合段--【A。发胖】+【B。变懒】=怪罪常吃【速食】
 
 
Essay Topics:
 
>Fast food is developing more and more popular.  It replaces other traditional food.  Some people think it is good while some people disagree with it. What is your opinion about it? Give reasons. [IELTS]
 
>A balanced diet or eating balanced meals is the key to a healthy life.  Do you agree or disagree? [IELTS]
 
>Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.  Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. [TOEFL iBT]
 
 
 
[Sample paragraphs: Introduction and Conclusion]
 
1. Introduction [eating fast food>A. getting fat and B. getting lazy]

These days, the way people eat has changed to some extent the way they live.  The new eating habits are far from eating well and staying fit. The problem seems to be increasing dependence on fast food rather than balanced meals.  Instead of seeking a healthy life, quite a few consumers of ready-to-eat food are getting fat and lazy.
 
2. Body paragraph A [about people getting fat].
 
3. Body paragraph B [about people getting lazy].
 
4. Conclusion [A. getting fat and B. getting lazy<eating fast food]

Overweight and laziness are no doubt related to people eating badly without paying attention to a balanced diet.  Probably, the solution could be found in the menu of more traditional food.  Refraining from eating too much fast food too often may therefore be an effective way to a healthy life.  Of course, people eat whatever to live, but to stay fit, fast food should not be the first choice.


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