新东方何钢：雅思大作文注意事项

 新东方何钢：雅思大作文注意事项 雅思一直是中国考生比较头疼的部分，怎样突破雅思写作高分?2012年雅思写作该注意些什么?新东方培训师何钢老师给考生们分享：雅思大作文注意事项。

一、雅思大作文开头：

开头要短小;要有立场和观点;避免模板。

如：Should the amount of advertising on TV be increased or decreased?

Nowadays many people discuss whether we need …or not.

Now whether…. has become a very hot debate in society.

As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. Some people think that ……Others believe that …... I think both views have their reasons.

Recently the ... has been brought into focus ... Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.

二、雅思大作文结构：

一个paragraph一个idea;避免过多examples, esp personal examples.;段落间的平衡

三、雅思大作文语言：

避免idioms, famous sayings

避免poetic language

Explain your point…then explain it again in a different way

Use “a mix of longer and short sentences”