雅思小作文自我检查列表

　　对于自己复习的雅思考生，在雅思写作的过程中最难提高的是没有人帮助修改，不知道作文写了哪里有错误，下面雅思小编为大家分享一名雅思考官曾经写过的作文修改列表，备考雅思的同学对着这个列表修改小作文，可以在一定程度上有所提升。

　　A checklist for part 1 graphs, charts and tables

　　In task 1 it is important that you accurately describe the information fromthe diagram so you don’t lose marks under Task Response. The difficulty is todecide what is the key information as there is often a lot of data to process.One way of thinking about this, is to ask yourself if someone could draw thechart and graph from the information in your report. This is not easy to do andso to help you, you will find below a 8 point checklist, an exercise and apractice suggestion.

　　雅思作文检查列表 Checklist

　　Here is my 8 point checklist to help you include the relevant details. Isuggest you use it to check your own work: you should be able to answer “yes”toall the questions.

　　1. Type of diagram 图表类型

　　Have you correctly identified whether it is a bar chart/line graph/piechart/flow chart/table?

　　有没有说清楚这个一个什么样的图表----柱状图?线图?饼图?还是流程图?

　　2. The correct tense 时态

　　Have you correctly identified whether the data in the chart relates to pasttime, a current state of affairs or a future prediction? This includes not justusing the correct tenses but also including specific times in your report.

　　有没有运用正确的时态呢?要记住，不止要用对时态，还要再小作文中写清具体的时间!

　　3. The subjects 对象

　　Have you included all the subjects that are referred to in the diagram?Even if you have a bar chart ortable naming 8 different countries for example,you still need to refer to them all in your report.

　　所有图表中所提到的对象都写进小作文了吗?如果图表里提到8个国家，全部都要写进去哦~

　　4. Units

　　Have you included references to the units? These may be units of time(months/years etc), money (millions of ￡) or simple numbers (10,000s). To dothis, you need to read the x and y axes carefully.

　　单位写清楚了吗?X轴和Y轴上的单位都要看清楚哦~

　　5. Highs and lows/Beginnings and ends/Biggest and smallest

　　Have you included the extremes shown in the diagram? In nearly all chartsand graphs these are key features to include as they give the reader a frame forunderstanding the chart or graph. When there is a lot of data, you may notinclude every extreme so you need to use your judgement.

　　文中有重要信息点了吗?最高点、最低点、起点、终点、最多的、最少的一定要写进去!

　　6. Patterns and trends 模式和趋势

　　Have you noted any patterns?

　　In dynamic charts (when there is a change in time), it is nearly alwaysimportant to note whether the general trend is upwards or downwards.

　　在一个有变化的图表里，整体趋势怎样，上升?下降?要写清~

　　In static charts (when there is only one time frame), it can be importantto note patterns. For example, if you look at my sample report on holidaydestinations, you will see that I group England, Scotland and Wales together andnote that they have a similar pattern.

　　7. Exceptions

　　Is there anything in the chart that is completely different to the generalpattern? If so, this too is very likely to be a key detail that needs to benoted.

　　除了常规方式外的东西也要写到，就是图表中的“例外”。

　　8. Ordering information排序

　　Have you ordered the information in a logical way? It is no good puttingall the right information in if the keys points are hidden away. This can happenif you follow the order of the chart without thinking. Possible logical ways ofordering the report include:

　　从图表中选择的信息，又按照合理的逻辑排列好顺序吗?常见的逻辑顺序有：

　　start with the most significant detail 从最重要的细节开始说起

　　start with the general pattern, then note exceptions 从一般模式说起，然后注明有例外

　　group items that are similar 写一组里面有相似性的东西

　　move from the largest to the smallest 从最大值写到最小值

　　move from the first in time to the last in time 从时间起点写到时间终点