雅思范文:外表衣着问题

Many young people today are too worried about the way they look and this causes them problems.
Do you agree or disagree?
What is the situation in your country?

From Levis to Louis Vuitton, amazingly how much young people have spent on taking care of their appearance.Besides the scary price tag, their increasing attention on how they look indeed worried some, if not all, parents.This essay is going to describe the situation in my country and furthermore shed some personal light on such issue.

It might be fair to say that many youngsters in my country are overwhelmingly concerned about their appearance.They argue that in an era of individuality, they have the right to identify themselves through their appearance.
Since first impression is critical in promoting oneself, therefore, a few bucks more on fashion and fad are worthwhile as long as it delivers a unique impression to others.One good example of this is the fact that many teenagers are strongly repelling against wearing uniforms at school.To them, this is suffocating their individuality and uniqueness.

No sensible person will deny the pinch brought by such phenomenon.Besides financial concern, distraction from work or study might be people's biggest fear.Due to the fact that some young people are willing to sacrifice tremendous amount of time on taking care of their appearance, thus little time might there be left for their study or work and consequently their performance in study or at work could not be secured.One rationale behind requiring uniform at schools is to partially avoid such disaster.By doing so, people hope students can shift more concentration from appearance to attendance.

In spite of the concerns raised by many as mentioned above, some, especially the younger generation, also voiced out their opinion.They believe the attention on appearance can benefits the development of their social skills.With appearance becoming common topic during daily conversation, not discussing it might seclude one from social communication among peers.If they well attend their appearance, it can not only provide them an ice-breaking topic, but enhance their self-confidence as well.If not, however, they might feel isolated from the mainstream.

To sum up,  both those who are for and against attention on appearance seem to have their grounds.Personally, I dare not deny young people's concern about their appearance as a whole.Through adopting and adapting such attention, it might be able to bring us more pleasure rather than pressure.