【高分语料库】雅思写作媒体类——新闻媒体对于人们生活的影响

【范文赏析】

【首段】背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

Perhaps nobody can avoid being swayed by various mass media. The news media have been exerting a tremendous influence on our lives because they can not only bring about glaring changes to the lives of ordinary people，but even ruin a political leader. Some people worry that the impacts of mass media are quite negative. From my perspective, however, what the news media can benefit us is greater than what they might influence us adversely.

【解析】

1. The news media have been exerting a tremendous influence on our lives because they can not only bring about glaring changes to the lives of ordinary people，but ruin a political leader . 新闻媒体具有巨大的影响力，它们不仅可以给普通人的生活带来重大的变化，甚至还能推翻一个政客。

2. From my perspective, however, what the news media can benefit us is greater than what they might influence us adversely. 然而，我认为，新闻给我们带来的利好远胜过其可能产生的不良影响。

【二段】 让步段：新闻传媒也许可能对人们的生活造成不良影响。

The opposite stand is also understandable. It is true that some paparazzi of tabloid magazines like to publish details about those superstars’ private lives，which might bring untold agonies to heroes of the story. Likewise, for the purpose of catering to the taste of the general public, some editors of newspapers and magazines also enjoy deliberately exaggerating so as to create a sensation. Surely enough, such irresponsible reportages should be highly condemned. However, we have no reason to throw out the baby with bath water.

【解析】

1. Some paparazzi tabloid magazines like to publish details about the superstars’ private lives，which might bring untold agonies to heroes of the story. 一些八卦小报的狗仔队喜欢发表关于明星生活隐私的细节，这会给当事人带来极大的痛苦。

2. Some editors of newspapers and magazines also enjoy deliberately exaggerating so as to create a sensation. 一些报刊杂志的编辑喜欢刻意夸大事实，以达到耸人听闻的目的。

3. Surely enough, such irresponsible reportages should be highly condemned. 当然，这些不负责任的报道应该被谴责。

4. However, we have no reason to throw out the baby with bath water. 但是，不分糟粕精华而全盘否定是不理性的。

【三段】 反驳段：新闻传媒给人们的生活带来的利好。

On no account can we underestimate the positive influences brought about by the news media.First, the mass media can play the role of educator. As for those who lack the habit of reading news, they are rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and the experience of the world. Conversely, reading news frequently can help us have a broader view of life and thus train our dialectical mode of thinking.

【解析】

1. They are rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and the experience of the world. 他们在常识和阅历方面都很受局限。

2. Reading news frequently can help us have a broader view of life and thus train our dialectical mode of thinking. 经常阅读新闻传媒可以拓宽我们的人生视野，因此，锻炼我们的辩证性思维。

【四段】 反驳段：新闻传媒给人们的生活带来的利好。

Also, various mews media can be an indispensable source of information for the vast majority of people. To illustrate, one of the most crucial lessons of a great many entrepreneurs is to Watch CCTV news everyday to familiarize themselves with the latest governmental policies and market information. Eventually, those amusing news stories can add color to the dull routine of every day life. I myself enjoy appreciate stories concerning the common people or mediocre life so that I could greatly deepen my insight into diverse lifestyles and grow spiritually during the process of thinking.

【解析】

1. Various mews media can be an indispensable source of information for the vast majority of people. 各种新闻传媒可以是大多数人获得信息的不可缺少的源泉。

2. Those amusing news stories can add color to the dull routine of every day life. 有趣的新闻报道可以增加我们枯燥常规生活的乐趣。

3. I could greatly deepen my insight into diverse lifestyles and grow spiritually during the process of thinking. 我可以极大地加深我对于不同的生活方式的洞察，思考的过程也让我在精神上成长。

【尾段】再次亮明观点

In closing, my stand is that various news media have and will have irreplaceable roles to play in our daily lives, the influence， to large extent， depends on how we treat and harness them. It is rather groundless to simply say that their impacts can always be baneful

【解析】

It is rather groundless to simply say that their impacts can always be baneful. 简单认为他们的影响是消极的是相当没有根据的。

【经典三剑客】

1. negative = adverse = baneful adj 有害的

2. the mass media = the news media = the media n 媒体

3. indispensable = crucial = vital adj 重要的

4. indispensable= irreplaceable = nonsubstitutable adj 不可替代的

5. influence = affect = impact n 影响