为大家带来2017年12月15场的雅思写作真题大作文范文,本场考试题目为社会类话题,题目为:In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time.What are the reasons?Is it a positive or negative development?在很多国家,越来越多的男性在家全职照顾孩子,而女性出去工作。是什么原因呢?这是一个积极还是消极的发展呢?
雅思写作9分范文
It is true that men are increasingly likely to take on the role of househusband, while more women than ever are the breadwinners in their families. There could be several reasons for this, and I consider it to be a very positive trend.
In recent years, parents have had to adapt to various changes in our societies. Equal rights movements have made great progress, and it has become normal for women to gain qualifications and pursue a career. It has also become socially acceptable for men to stay at home and look after their children. At the same time, the rising cost of living has meant that both marriage partners usually need to work and save money before starting a family. Therefore, when couples have children, they may decide who works and who stays at home depending on the personal preference of each partner, or based on which partner earns the most money.
In my view, the changes described above should be seen as progress. We should be happy to live in a society in which men and women have equal opportunities, and in which women are not put under pressure to sacrifice their careers. Equally, it seems only fair that men should be free to leave their jobs in order to assume their childcare responsibilities if this is what they wish to do. Couples should be left to make their own decisions about which parental role each partner takes, according to their particular circumstances and needs.
In conclusion, the changing roles of men and women in the family are a result of wider changes in society, and I believe that these developments are desirable. (274 words, band 9)
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高分语段:
It is true that men are increasingly likely to take on the role of househusband, while more women than ever are the breadwinners in their families. There could be several reasons for this, and I consider it to be a very positive trend.
Equal rights movements have made great progress, and it has become normal for women to gain qualifications and pursue a career.
We should be happy to live in a society in which men and women have equal opportunities, and in which women are not put under pressure to sacrifice their careers.
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