2018最新雅思写作满分范文:手机和座机上的开支的变化以及比较

请看本文针对惯例题型的雅思小作文地线图范文,论题是美国2001-2010年间年均花在手机和座机上的开支的改变以及比较,全文共162词,9分级。

2018最新雅思Task1写作满分范文 线图之座机与手机开支图1

The line graph shows the average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

该线图展现美国2001-2010年间年均花在手机和座机上的开支。请作答。

雅思图表小作文线图9分范文:

The line graph compares average yearly spending by Americans on mobile and landline phone services from 2001 to 2010.

It is clear that spending on landline phones fell steadily over the 10-year period, while mobile phone expenditure rose quickly. The year 2006 marks the point at which expenditure on mobile services overtook that for residential phone services.

In 2001, US consumers spent an average of nearly $700 on residential phone services, compared to only around $200 on cell phone services. Over the following five years, average yearly spending on landlines dropped by nearly $200. By contrast, expenditure on mobiles rose by approximately $300.

In the year 2006, the average American paid out the same amount of money on both types of phone service, spending just over $500 on each. By 2010, expenditure on mobile phones had reached around $750, while the figure for spending on residential services had fallen to just over half this amount.(162 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文考官范文根本套路

段一:论题重述

段二:归纳论题数据的主要特征或规则

段三:胪陈特征规则一

段四:胪陈特征规则二

留意:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段,无定论。




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