2018雅思图表小作文范文:世界水用途变化

请看最新的雅思a类小作文论题,关于混合图(线图+表格)题型:The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Write at least 150 Words.(100年间的国际水用处变化以及2000年巴西和刚果的水耗费。请写一篇150字以上的报告。)

2018雅思图表小作文混合图范文共享 国际用水图1

雅思图表小作文混合图(线图+表格)9分范文:

The charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.

It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900 and 2000, and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used. We can also see that water consumption was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo.

In 1900, around 500km³ of water was used by the agriculture sector worldwide. The figures for industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of that amount. By 2000, global water use for agriculture had increased to around 3000km³, industrial water use had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500km³.

In the year 2000, the populations of Brazil and the Congo were 176 million and 5.2 million respectively. Water consumption per person in Brazil, at 359m³, was much higher than that in the Congo, at only 8m³, and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more irrigated land.(184 words, band 9)

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For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所拿手的图表作文4段9句大法,具体结构如下:

1.Introduction: 1 sentence,Introduction阶段,1句话介绍图表粗心足矣

2.Overview (summary): 2 sentences,Overview段,用2句话做图表信息的摘要

3.First 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences

4.Second 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences。

三、四段为细节段,每段3句做具体的特征或规则的描绘。

当然,Simon同学不忘弥补,这仅仅他个人在写作时的偏好结构,好文无定法,我们也不需求拘泥于9句,只需内容表达的需求,8句,10句都是没问题的。

PS:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!我们可留神这一点。当然小作文是否需求写总结段,雅思届尚无定论。



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