不管是雅思写作还是雅思口语,其实都离不开衔接词。咱们在沟通,表达,不单单是靠着各种牛气哄哄的高分词汇句型完结,衔接词恰似铆钉,恰似润滑剂,让整个表达与论述焕然一体且逻辑规整。请看本文从起承转合四个视点共享通用的一些雅思写作衔接词。另附一篇雅思9分大作文的解说,我们能够从中去发现考官是怎样灵敏运用雅思写作衔接词的。
雅思写作衔接词之起:
First/firstly/first of all/ to begin with/to start with/ in the first place,
First and foremost;For one thing(… for another);On the one hand(…on the other)
雅思写作衔接词之承:
Second/secondly;Third/thirdly;Besides/in addition/ in addition to…;Furthermore/what is more/moreover;Namely/ in other words;In the same way/similarly/likewise;Afterwards/ after that/ after a while;Consequently/as a consequence/as a result
雅思写作衔接词之转:
But/yet;However/Nonetheless/Nevertheless;On the contrary/conversely;Though/although/even though/even if;Unlike…. ,A…;Different from… , A….;In fact/ as a matter of fact,
雅思写作衔接词之合:
Finally/eventually/in the final analysis;In conclusion/to conclude;In short/In brief;In summary/ to sum up/in sum;As I have said/as has been noted;Given the fact that…., we can come to the conclusion that…
另附雅思大作文考官范文示例
In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
构思进程:
茕居,也就是一个人日子,显着有利有弊,假如挑选一边倒观念显着都站不住脚,很难证明,需求分隔评论均匀用力。主体段一段写优点,一段写坏处。抽象类话题往往在寻觅观念上比较困难或许没有方向,建议我们依照文波雅思教授的办法分类提取观念。本篇考官分别从个人和经济的视点出发,层次分明证明明晰,值得我们学习。
Introduction
1)布景导入,说尤其在发达国家的大城市,最近几年茕居变得更为常见。
In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone,particularly in large cities in the developed world.
(句型结构:It adj. for sb. to do sth. 后置状语补充,留意完结时has become;留意particularly的用法,举特例方便直接,相似especially但语气更强; in the developed world比in developed countries更地道;far more润饰normal代入感强)
2)观念句,我认为这个趋势的影响好坏参半。
In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
(句型结构:简略句 后置状语;虚拟语气could have;consequences高分词;in equal measure高分调配)
Main Paragraphs 1
1)段首归纳,一个人住在个人和微观经济上都有优点。
The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons.
(句型结构:被迫 后置状语并排;主语the rise in one-person households替换more people choose to live alone,地道高分调配精确;seen as语法得分点;personal & broader economic词汇得分点)
2)分观念1:个人层面上,茕居的人可能变得比和家人一同住的人更独立自强(常见观念)
On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members.
(句型结构:前置状语 主语who从句 谓语比较级 宾语who从句,高分复合句;self-reliant高分词,展现词汇量)
3)举例证明 线性推理打开:茕居年轻人需求学煮饭,做家务,付账单,管账等重要的日子技术;这样的人添加了就是种正面的发展
A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development.
(句型结构:主语从句 插入语 不定式并排 宾语all of which从句;简略分句 被迫;valuable得分词;an increase语法得分点;such individuals指代精确,语法和词汇得分点)
4)分观念2:经济视点上看,茕居的趋势会导致住宅需求添加(加分观念)
From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result ingreater demand for housing.
(句型结构:前置状语 后置定语 简略句;trend towards living调配精确,词汇和语法得分点;result in学术调配,词汇得分点;demand for housing词汇得分点)
5) 举例阐明打开:这样会让建筑公司,房产中介和其它依靠业主购买产品的公司获益。
This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.
(句型结构:简略句 宾语并排 宾语that从句;likely to benefit学术调配,词汇得分点;construction industry & estate agents展现词汇量;rely on homeowners词汇得分点)
Main Paragraph 2
1)段首归纳:上述个人和经济的观念能够反向考虑;(简介易懂,挂钩前文暗含比照,CC满分技巧)
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle.
(句型结构:转机 简略句被迫;given above非谓语润饰,语法得分点;be considered from学术调配,词汇语法得分点;the opposite angle词汇得分点)
2)分观念1:和独立的优点比较,茕居的人会感觉孤单、隔离和不安(常见观念)
Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry.
(句型结构:前置状语 主语从句 宾语并排;rather than无痕迹比照,语法和CC得分点;loneliness & isolation高分词)
3)举例比照 证明打开:他们错过了家人或室友提供的对话和支撑,还要承当过重的家庭账单和责任;这样来说,这个趋势就是负面的
They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one.
(句型结构:简略句并排 宾语从句 简略分句;miss out on地道调配;emotional support, daily conversation & flatmates词汇加分点;bear the weight of高分调配,词汇得分点;a negative one指代精确防止重复,语法得分点)
4)分观念2:从经济视点来说,住宅需求添加会推高房价和租金(加分观念)
Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents.
(句式结构:前置状语 简略句;the financial point of view替换an economic perspective;likely to push up学术调配;property prices & rents词汇得分点)
5)比照证明 阐明打开:尽管让企业获益,但群众包含茕居的人都要面对更高的寓居本钱
While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.
(句式结构:退让句 插入语补充 被迫;be faced with地道调配;rising living costs词汇得分点)
Conclusion
1)一句话总结:茕居添加对个人和经济影响有好有坏
In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
(句式结构:总结 简略句 宾补;detrimental不利的,高分词,beneficial & detrimental替换positive & negative;两个on介词短语并排,语法得分点)
雅思大作文评分
TR: 双面观念完好答复问题,分观念详实有深度,首尾段观念总结到位,9分
CC: 全篇结构明晰,规整,行文衔接通畅,易于了解,没有显着模板痕迹,9分
LR: 词汇十分多样,同义替换到位,调配地道精确,9分
GA: 句型多变,复合句有用灵敏,没有语法错误,9分
(13 sentences, 306 words, band 9)
考官经典的雅思大作文4段13句模板,我们能够仿照哦,留意,这里所谓的模板,是指他所了解和擅长的一种行文结构,而并非详细的模板句型。
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